RR:Dawn Attack (short)

"Corvus Corvax" <[email hidden]> wrote in message
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The sun isn't even close to being over the horizon when I leave for work this morning on the fix.
I have to put the Niterider on, and I ride through the early morning traffic and crisp air,
feeling glad of it all. Empty school buses ply the suburbs on their way to pick up their surly
cargo. The early commuters are out, already edgy, agitated, and obnoxious. I spin, smooth, as the
sun pulls itself up over the limb of the earth. 'Morning.

CC

Wow. So poetic! Someone put this on a pic of a rider looking out over the dawn and we can sell it
on a poster!

Sir Ride-a-bit says:

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Wow. So poetic! Someone put this on a pic of a rider looking out over the dawn and we can sell it
on a poster!

[censored], no! You'd have to have cars and trucks all over the background to make it work. Let's just
produce a nice poster of a rider with the sun coming up...

Steve "no offense, CC - nice writing.."

"Corvus Corvax" <[email hidden]> wrote in message
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The sun isn't even close to being over the horizon when I leave for work this morning on the fix.
I have to put the Niterider on, and I ride through the early morning traffic and crisp air,
feeling glad of it all. Empty school buses ply the suburbs on their way to pick up their surly
cargo. The early commuters are out, already edgy, agitated, and obnoxious. I spin, smooth, as the
sun pulls itself up over the limb of the earth. 'Morning.

CC

I've seen the limb of the earth in Buffalo. It's really hairy and covered with tattoos. ;^)

Beautiful prose CC.

Mike - 'Morning back.

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Sir Ride-a-bit says:

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Wow. So poetic! Someone put this on a pic of a rider looking out over

the

Quoted message said:

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dawn and we can sell it on a poster!

[censored], no! You'd have to have cars and trucks all over the background to

make

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it work. Let's just produce a nice poster of a rider with the sun coming

up...

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Steve "no offense, CC - nice writing.."

Something like this. Sorry MattB, I borrowed your pic.

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Sir Ride-A-Lot said:

Something like this. Sorry MattB, I borrowed your pic.

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Call me Mr Picky, but I seem to be missing (in no particular order) the Niterider, darkness, early
morning traffic, empty school buses, suburbs, a fixed gear bike and early commuters.

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LOL. I don't have all day to look for the perfect pic. Use your imagination. Better yet, if you've
got some art talent, draw the items that are missing.

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Sir Ride-A-Lot said:

Something like this. Sorry MattB, I borrowed your pic.

njtrails.comalbum pic.phpOpen ↗

Call me Mr Picky, but I seem to be missing (in no particular order) the Niterider, darkness, early
morning traffic, empty school buses, suburbs, a fixed gear bike and early commuters.

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The sun isn't even close to being over the horizon when I leave for work this morning on the fix.
I have to put the Niterider on, and I ride through the early morning traffic and crisp air,
feeling glad of it all. Empty school buses ply the suburbs on their way to pick up their surly
cargo. The early commuters are out, already edgy, agitated, and obnoxious. I spin, smooth, as the
sun pulls itself up over the limb of the earth. 'Morning.

CC

Ahhhh.... I gotta move to Buffalo. /s

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"Stephen Baker" <[email hidden]> wrote in message
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Sir Ride-a-bit says:

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Wow. So poetic! Someone put this on a pic of a rider looking out over

the

Quoted message said:

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dawn and we can sell it on a poster!

[censored], no! You'd have to have cars and trucks all over the background to

make

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it work. Let's just produce a nice poster of a rider with the sun

coming

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up...

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Steve "no offense, CC - nice writing.."

Something like this. Sorry MattB, I borrowed your pic.

S'ok. I accept PayPal...

Matt

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The sun isn't even close to being over the horizon when I leave for work this morning on the
fix. I have to put the Niterider on, and I ride through the early morning traffic and crisp air,
feeling glad of it all. Empty school buses ply the suburbs on their way to pick up their surly
cargo. The early commuters are out, already edgy, agitated, and obnoxious. I spin, smooth, as
the sun pulls itself up over the limb of the earth. 'Morning.

CC

Ahhhh.... I gotta move to Buffalo. /s

LOL!!!

Mike

(Corvus Corvax) said:

The sun isn't even close to being over the horizon when I leave for work this morning on the fix. I
have to put the Niterider on, and I ride through the early morning traffic and crisp air, feeling
glad of it all. Empty school buses ply the suburbs on their way to pick up their surly cargo. The
early commuters are out, already edgy, agitated, and obnoxious. I spin, smooth, as the sun pulls
itself up over the limb of the earth. 'Morning.

CC

Nice! Bill