"Stan Horwitz" <[email hidden]> wrote in message
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Quoted message said:I intend to use a printed copy of each of these eleven photos for a
critique this coming Tuesday night in the art class I am taking. As
such, I would greatly appreciate your feedback on these photos. My
emphasis with these photos is shooting unique photos in Center City
Philadelphia that no one else is likely to shoot.
I don't know much about photography, but since many of the previous
responses talked about tea, I figure my 2 cents couldn't hurt. (Not
that there's anything wrong with tea, Jill and Wayne! :-).
I think your photos taken from behind the waterfall are great -- to me,
they seem unique and I'd guess that no one else would be likely to shoot
them. It might be fun for your audience to try to guess what those two
photos are...you might get some interesting responses!
The next two photos, of the outside of the waterfall, are probably not
that unique, but they are interesting because they provide context for
the inside-the-waterfall shots.
The CRW_5311 subway concourse shot is cool -- I'm not sure how unique it
is...it might be a view that people have seen a thousand times, but
never bothered to snap before (but I don't know Philly). With that in
mind, it would be interesting to see that shot cropped a little closer,
so that you didn't have quite enough information to tell what it really
is...and then show your original shot, where it becomes clear. (My
husband does goofy stuff on our computer w/ digital photos...he'll bring
one in, zoom in super close on some ridiculous detail, and have me guess
what it is...and then he'll zoom out a bit at a time, at last showing me
the original photo).
CRW_5386 makes me wonder what it would look like to stand directly
beneath that mast thingie and shoot straight up.
CRW_5437...I love this shot. What I love is that a few people are
looking at the toilet seat guy, but he seems unaware of them...and
others in the picture appear not to notice, as if they're just waiting
for the light to change and hadn't noticed anything unusual. Ho hum!
Whoops, Stan, that's all you're going to get of my completely clueless
opinions tonight...my little guy's crying again. Have fun and thanks
for sharing! YOu should get a good laugh out of those toilet trikes!!!
Chris