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Michael Press
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In article <[email protected]>,
Ben C <[email protected]> wrote:
> On 2008-03-18, Michael Press <[email protected]> wrote:
> > In article <[email protected]>,
> > [email protected] wrote:
> >
> >> We might as well debate whether "no particular interest" is (according
> >> to Jobst's version of the Strunk & White approach) just as awful an
> >> error as "the fact that," a false distinction that should be edited
> >> out wherever it appears, and an unmistakable sign of muddy thinking
> >> that invalidates everything said by anyone who writes it.
> >
> > It is not muddy thinking, it is a deliberate attempt
> > to win an argument by asserting that ones thesis is a _fact_
>
> It can be used like that, but not necessarily: you could perfectly well
> say "the proposition that" (like your Abraham Lincoln) or "the thesis
> that", etc.
>
> Strunk & White are talking rubbish. The phrase does have a use which is
> to turn an indirect statement into a noun. Yes you can just about elide
> it but that can lead to confusion especially in a long sentence. There
> is nothing wrong with long sentences and sometimes they need more
> signposts in them like "the fact that" to help you find your way around.
The original to which Jobst replied asserted a state of
affairs, the entire support of the assertion being the
phrase "the fact that". Jobst labeled the original use
"begging the question". He was talking about a logical
fallacy not style.
--
Michael Press
Ben C <[email protected]> wrote:
> On 2008-03-18, Michael Press <[email protected]> wrote:
> > In article <[email protected]>,
> > [email protected] wrote:
> >
> >> We might as well debate whether "no particular interest" is (according
> >> to Jobst's version of the Strunk & White approach) just as awful an
> >> error as "the fact that," a false distinction that should be edited
> >> out wherever it appears, and an unmistakable sign of muddy thinking
> >> that invalidates everything said by anyone who writes it.
> >
> > It is not muddy thinking, it is a deliberate attempt
> > to win an argument by asserting that ones thesis is a _fact_
>
> It can be used like that, but not necessarily: you could perfectly well
> say "the proposition that" (like your Abraham Lincoln) or "the thesis
> that", etc.
>
> Strunk & White are talking rubbish. The phrase does have a use which is
> to turn an indirect statement into a noun. Yes you can just about elide
> it but that can lead to confusion especially in a long sentence. There
> is nothing wrong with long sentences and sometimes they need more
> signposts in them like "the fact that" to help you find your way around.
The original to which Jobst replied asserted a state of
affairs, the entire support of the assertion being the
phrase "the fact that". Jobst labeled the original use
"begging the question". He was talking about a logical
fallacy not style.
--
Michael Press