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  1. http://www.boston.com/news/nation/washington/articles/2008/03/14/president_weakens_espionage_oversight/?page=2

  2. In article <[email hidden]>,

    still just me said:

    http://www.boston.com/news/nation/washington/articles/2008/03/14/president_wea
    kens_espionage_oversight/?page=2

    Hey, the Republican Party believes in a strong Presidecy which does not
    have to defer to Congress on any issue and can arrogate to itself powers
    not authorized in the Constitution and write exceptions to any laws that
    might be inconvenient.

    Unless the President is a Democrat. Just wait for the squalling if
    President Obama or President Hillary tries to operate as arrogantly as
    Bush/Cheney/Rove.

  3. Tim McNamara said:


    Hey, the Republican Party believes in a strong Presidecy which does not
    have to defer to Congress on any issue and can arrogate to itself powers
    not authorized in the Constitution and write exceptions to any laws that
    might be inconvenient.

    Unless the President is a Democrat. Just wait for the squalling if
    President Obama or President Hillary tries to operate as arrogantly as
    Bush/Cheney/Rove.

    To be fair to Bush, this particular commission was originally
    appointed by Ford. He created it only to avoid an even stronger
    commission being appointed by Congress at the time, but it was within
    GWB's legal rights to change it. (That's obviously a rarity for him).
    But, at the same time, he's made it useless. They have no authority
    and no way to report to anyone that cares. He might have just as well
    dissolved it - but gutting it lets him kill it and few people notice.

    You are right about the last part - look at what they did to Clinton
    about a blow job and what Bush has gotten away with. However, I blame
    the Democrats for that - they are not doing their job in pursuing the
    numerous violations of the law, and just plain outrageous behavior
    like this, by Bush.

  4. Tim McNamara said:

    In article <[email hidden]>,

    still just me said:

    http://www.boston.com/news/nation/washington/articles/2008/03/14/pres...
    kens_espionage_oversight/?page=2

    Hey, the Republican Party believes in a strong Presidecy which does not
    have to defer to Congress on any issue and can arrogate to itself powers
    not authorized in the Constitution and write exceptions to any laws that
    might be inconvenient.

    Unless the President is a Democrat. Just wait for the squalling if
    President Obama or President Hillary tries to operate as arrogantly as
    Bush/Cheney/Rove.

    Problem with domestic spying without oversight is that undermines
    democracy. There is simply too much temptation to use it on political
    opposition - making democratic elections a complete fiction.
    Watergate was nothing compared with it. And please do not tell me
    that "it will only be used against terrorists" - that is just like
    that favourite argument about ties between Saddam and alQaeda:
    http://www.guardian.co.uk/world/2008/mar/13/iraq.usa
    "A US military study officially acknowledged for the first time
    yesterday that Saddam Hussein had no direct ties to al-Qaida,
    undercutting the Bush administration's central case for war with
    Iraq."

  5. Woland99 said:

    Problem with domestic spying without oversight is that undermines
    democracy. There is simply too much temptation to use it on political
    opposition - making democratic elections a complete fiction.
    Watergate was nothing compared with it.
    And please do not tell me
    that "it will only be used against terrorists" -

    Agreed. Yet the number of people I run into that believe that there is
    some way of determining guilt before even doing surveillance, and that
    it will all be above board with no oversight, is astounding. People in
    this country are just plain stupid. Look at the number who buy into
    not only retroactive immunity for the telecomms that violated our
    rights, but continuing immunity so that the gov't can continue to
    violate our rights.

    The Bush-ians stand up and yell how they can't protect us without
    violating our Constitutional rights. Somehow I think they are unclear
    on the principles that created this country. This is the very sort of
    thing that was core to the American Revolution. Yet there are millions
    of dopes who go along for the ride as the Bush-ians blast out their
    message over and over. It's the old "tell a lie long enough and make
    it the truth".

    Quoted message said:

    that is just like
    that favourite argument about ties between Saddam and alQaeda:
    http://www.guardian.co.uk/world/2008/mar/13/iraq.usa
    "A US military study officially acknowledged for the first time
    yesterday that Saddam Hussein had no direct ties to al-Qaida,
    undercutting the Bush administration's central case for war with
    Iraq."

    Duh. Same as above. Tell a lie long enough and it becomes the truth.

  6. Woland99 said:

    And please do not tell me
    that "it will only be used against terrorists" -

    I like it's follow up, "Trust us, we know what we are doing." and "We do
    not torture."

  7. still just me said:

    The Bush-ians stand up and yell how they can't protect us without
    violating our Constitutional rights. Somehow I think they are unclear
    on the principles that created this country.

    Not only that, they ignore the fact that many other countries, e.g. the
    UK and Germany to mention only two, have been dealing with terrorism for
    much longer than we have, and yet have managed to do so without
    compromising their citizens' rights.

    --

    John ([email hidden])

  8. John Thompson said:

    Not only that, they ignore the fact that many other countries, e.g.
    the UK and Germany to mention only two, have been dealing with
    terrorism for much longer than we have, and yet have managed to do so
    without compromising their citizens' rights.

    Do a little research. HTH

  9. Bill Sornson said:
    Quoted message said:

    Not only that, they ignore the fact that many other countries, e.g.
    the UK and Germany to mention only two, have been dealing with
    terrorism for much longer than we have, and yet have managed to do so
    without compromising their citizens' rights.

    Quoted message said:

    Do a little research. HTH

    Beware of anyone who uses the phrase "the fact that" to establish some
    concept. In English composition, this is known as begging the
    question. Instead of the phrase, the circumstances that appear to
    make the concept a "fact" need be explained.

    "the fact that" belongs in the same trash bin that the other hackneyed
    phrases recently mentioned went to their demise for thinking writers.

    Jobst Brandt

  10. Quoted message said:
    Quoted message said:

    John Thompson:

    Quoted message said:

    Not only that, they ignore the fact that many other countries, e.g.
    the UK and Germany to mention only two, have been dealing with
    terrorism for much longer than we have, and yet have managed to do so
    without compromising their citizens' rights.

    Quoted message said:
    Bill Sornson said:

    Do a little research. HTH

    Quoted message said:

    Beware of anyone who uses the phrase "the fact that" to establish some
    concept. In English composition, this is known as begging the
    question. Instead of the phrase, the circumstances that appear to
    make the concept a "fact" need be explained.
    "the fact that" belongs in the same trash bin that the other hackneyed
    phrases recently mentioned went to their demise for thinking writers.

    Indeed, from Strunk, 'Elements of Style':

    Vigorous writing is concise. A sentence should contain no unnecessary
    words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences, for the same reason that a
    drawing should have no unnecessary lines and a machine no unnecessary
    parts. This requires not that the writer make all his sentences short,
    or that he avoid all detail and treat his subjects only in outline, but
    that every word tell.

    Many expressions in common use violate this principle:
    -snip table-
    In especial the expression /the fact that/ should be revised out of
    every sentence in which it occurs.
    [italics original]

    I'm not exceptional at composition either.
    --
    Andrew Muzi
    www.yellowjersey.org
    Open every day since 1 April, 1971

  11. On Mon, 17 Mar 2008 18:02:22 -0600, A Muzi <[email hidden]>

    Quoted message said:
    Quoted message said:
    Quoted message said:

    John Thompson:
    > Not only that, they ignore the fact that many other countries, e.g.
    > the UK and Germany to mention only two, have been dealing with
    > terrorism for much longer than we have, and yet have managed to do so
    > without compromising their citizens' rights.

    Quoted message said:
    Bill Sornson said:

    Do a little research. HTH

    Quoted message said:

    Beware of anyone who uses the phrase "the fact that" to establish some
    concept. In English composition, this is known as begging the
    question. Instead of the phrase, the circumstances that appear to
    make the concept a "fact" need be explained.
    "the fact that" belongs in the same trash bin that the other hackneyed
    phrases recently mentioned went to their demise for thinking writers.

    Indeed, from Strunk, 'Elements of Style':

    Vigorous writing is concise. A sentence should contain no unnecessary
    words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences, for the same reason that a
    drawing should have no unnecessary lines and a machine no unnecessary
    parts. This requires not that the writer make all his sentences short,
    or that he avoid all detail and treat his subjects only in outline, but
    that every word tell.

    Many expressions in common use violate this principle:
    -snip table-
    In especial the expression /the fact that/ should be revised out of
    every sentence in which it occurs.
    [italics original]

    I'm not exceptional at composition either.

    Dear Andrew,

    The fact that some posters have ended up quibbling over phrases that
    they pretend to find offensive only exposes their lack of anything
    relevant to say about the subject.

    Cheers,

    Carl Fogel

  12. Quoted message said:
    Quoted message said:
    Quoted message said:

    > John Thompson:
    >> Not only that, they ignore the fact that many other countries, e.g.
    >> the UK and Germany to mention only two, have been dealing with
    >> terrorism for much longer than we have, and yet have managed to do so
    >> without compromising their citizens' rights.

    Quoted message said:
    Quoted message said:
    Quoted message said:

    Bill Sornson wrote:
    > Do a little research. HTH

    Quoted message said:
    Quoted message said:
    Quoted message said:

    Beware of anyone who uses the phrase "the fact that" to establish some
    concept. In English composition, this is known as begging the
    question. Instead of the phrase, the circumstances that appear to
    make the concept a "fact" need be explained.
    "the fact that" belongs in the same trash bin that the other hackneyed
    phrases recently mentioned went to their demise for thinking writers.

    Quoted message said:
    A Muzi said:

    Indeed, from Strunk, 'Elements of Style':
    "Vigorous writing is concise. A sentence should contain no unnecessary
    words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences, for the same reason that a
    drawing should have no unnecessary lines and a machine no unnecessary
    parts. This requires not that the writer make all his sentences short,
    or that he avoid all detail and treat his subjects only in outline, but
    that every word tell.
    Many expressions in common use violate this principle:
    -snip table-
    In especial the expression /the fact that/ should be revised out of
    every sentence in which it occurs."
    [italics original]
    I'm not exceptional at composition either.

    Quoted message said:

    The fact that some posters have ended up quibbling over phrases that
    they pretend to find offensive only exposes their lack of anything
    relevant to say about the subject.

    The subject is a tarbaby I'm happy to not engage here. But, hey, a
    citation for an off-topic comment to an off-topic thread? Sure!
    --
    Andrew Muzi
    www.yellowjersey.org
    Open every day since 1 April, 1971

  13. In article <[email hidden]>,

    Quoted message said:

    On Mon, 17 Mar 2008 18:02:22 -0600, A Muzi <[email hidden]>

    Quoted message said:
    Quoted message said:

    > John Thompson:
    >> Not only that, they ignore the fact that many other countries, e.g.
    >> the UK and Germany to mention only two, have been dealing with
    >> terrorism for much longer than we have, and yet have managed to do so
    >> without compromising their citizens' rights.

    Quoted message said:

    Bill Sornson wrote:
    > Do a little research. HTH

    Quoted message said:

    Beware of anyone who uses the phrase "the fact that" to establish some
    concept. In English composition, this is known as begging the
    question. Instead of the phrase, the circumstances that appear to
    make the concept a "fact" need be explained.
    "the fact that" belongs in the same trash bin that the other hackneyed
    phrases recently mentioned went to their demise for thinking writers.

    Indeed, from Strunk, 'Elements of Style':

    Vigorous writing is concise. A sentence should contain no unnecessary
    words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences, for the same reason that a
    drawing should have no unnecessary lines and a machine no unnecessary
    parts. This requires not that the writer make all his sentences short,
    or that he avoid all detail and treat his subjects only in outline, but
    that every word tell.

    Many expressions in common use violate this principle:
    -snip table-
    In especial the expression /the fact that/ should be revised out of
    every sentence in which it occurs.
    [italics original]

    I'm not exceptional at composition either.

    The fact that some posters have ended up quibbling over phrases that
    they pretend to find offensive only exposes their lack of anything
    relevant to say about the subject.

    What Jobst said is relevant, clear, and makes a strong argument.
    That you choose to ignore his argument it does not make it go away.

    --
    Michael Press

  14. On Mon, 17 Mar 2008 18:56:26 -0600, A Muzi <[email hidden]>

    Quoted message said:
    Quoted message said:
    Quoted message said:

    >> John Thompson:
    >>> Not only that, they ignore the fact that many other countries, e.g.
    >>> the UK and Germany to mention only two, have been dealing with
    >>> terrorism for much longer than we have, and yet have managed to do so
    >>> without compromising their citizens' rights.

    Quoted message said:
    Quoted message said:

    > Bill Sornson wrote:
    >> Do a little research. HTH

    Quoted message said:
    Quoted message said:

    [email hidden] wrote:
    > Beware of anyone who uses the phrase "the fact that" to establish some
    > concept. In English composition, this is known as begging the
    > question. Instead of the phrase, the circumstances that appear to
    > make the concept a "fact" need be explained.
    > "the fact that" belongs in the same trash bin that the other hackneyed
    > phrases recently mentioned went to their demise for thinking writers.

    Quoted message said:
    A Muzi said:

    Indeed, from Strunk, 'Elements of Style':
    "Vigorous writing is concise. A sentence should contain no unnecessary
    words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences, for the same reason that a
    drawing should have no unnecessary lines and a machine no unnecessary
    parts. This requires not that the writer make all his sentences short,
    or that he avoid all detail and treat his subjects only in outline, but
    that every word tell.
    Many expressions in common use violate this principle:
    -snip table-
    In especial the expression /the fact that/ should be revised out of
    every sentence in which it occurs."
    [italics original]
    I'm not exceptional at composition either.

    Quoted message said:

    The fact that some posters have ended up quibbling over phrases that
    they pretend to find offensive only exposes their lack of anything
    relevant to say about the subject.

    The subject is a tarbaby I'm happy to not engage here. But, hey, a
    citation for an off-topic comment to an off-topic thread? Sure!

    Dear Andrew,

    Hopefully, the vast majority of us will pardon you for splitting that
    infinitive.

    :-)

    The reason that Strunk & White is so short is that the book doesn't
    waste any time telling you how to write an essay.

    Instead, it urges endless revisions at the sentence level, such as
    removing "The reason that" and "so" and "any" in the sentence above.

    The book never raises its head to address anything above the sentence
    level. (How to write an essay is a separate subject.)

    Unfortunately, some people fall in love with revising sentences
    because rewriting gives them a pleasant sense of superiority, and it's
    easy to do--any sentence can be rephrased endlessly.

    Of course, you can rewrite your own sentences without irritating
    anyone, but revision can become an obnoxious obsession.

    For example, some posters on RBT fondly imagine that they are English
    teachers and that other posters are their students, whose style and
    sentences must be corrected.

    In extreme cases, a quibbler may even re-write his own book, sentence
    by sentence, without much improvement--even unto a third edition.

    In contrast, RBT's best writer is Chalo Colina.

    Chalo writes clear sentences, and his posts are free from typos,
    spelling mistakes, bad punctuation, and poor grammar.

    But that's not what makes Chalo's posts so good.

    Chalo's secret is his focus. He gives his main point the most space in
    his post. He doesn't wander. When he's made his point, he quits.

    (Unlike some of us, who can't resist parenthetic digressions and
    trivia.)

    A post from Chalo is an editor's dream. Whether you agree with him or
    not, Chalo has a point and he makes it without getting sidetracked.

    A quibbler will be more interested in removing the "or not" in the
    previous sentence than in what the sentence says.

    Who can imagine Chalo citing Strunk & White to justify nagging another
    poster to omit those two words?

    If Chalo disagrees with you, he doesn't waste much time quibbling
    about how you expressed yourself. He addresses your point, which is
    probably the best style.

    Cheers,

    Carl Fogel

  15. Michael Press wrote:
    {snip}

    Quoted message said:

    That you choose to ignore his argument it does not make it go away.

    Your sentence it is faulty.

    BS

  16. Quoted message said:
    Quoted message said:
    Quoted message said:

    >>> John Thompson:
    >>>> Not only that, they ignore the fact that many other countries, e.g.
    >>>> the UK and Germany to mention only two, have been dealing with
    >>>> terrorism for much longer than we have, and yet have managed to do so
    >>>> without compromising their citizens' rights.

    Quoted message said:
    Quoted message said:
    Quoted message said:

    >> Bill Sornson wrote:
    >>> Do a little research. HTH

    Quoted message said:
    Quoted message said:
    Quoted message said:

    > [email hidden] wrote:
    >> Beware of anyone who uses the phrase "the fact that" to establish some
    >> concept. In English composition, this is known as begging the
    >> question. Instead of the phrase, the circumstances that appear to
    >> make the concept a "fact" need be explained.
    >> "the fact that" belongs in the same trash bin that the other hackneyed
    >> phrases recently mentioned went to their demise for thinking writers.

    Quoted message said:
    Quoted message said:
    Quoted message said:

    A Muzi <[email hidden]> wrote:
    > Indeed, from Strunk, 'Elements of Style':
    > "Vigorous writing is concise. A sentence should contain no unnecessary
    > words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences, for the same reason that a
    > drawing should have no unnecessary lines and a machine no unnecessary
    > parts. This requires not that the writer make all his sentences short,
    > or that he avoid all detail and treat his subjects only in outline, but
    > that every word tell.
    > Many expressions in common use violate this principle:
    > -snip table-
    > In especial the expression /the fact that/ should be revised out of
    > every sentence in which it occurs."
    > [italics original]
    > I'm not exceptional at composition either.

    Quoted message said:
    Quoted message said:
    Quoted message said:

    The fact that some posters have ended up quibbling over phrases that
    they pretend to find offensive only exposes their lack of anything
    relevant to say about the subject.

    Quoted message said:
    A Muzi said:

    The subject is a tarbaby I'm happy to not engage here. But, hey, a
    citation for an off-topic comment to an off-topic thread? Sure!

    Quoted message said:

    Hopefully, the vast majority of us will pardon you for splitting that
    infinitive.

    :-)

    The reason that Strunk & White is so short is that the book doesn't
    waste any time telling you how to write an essay.

    Instead, it urges endless revisions at the sentence level, such as
    removing "The reason that" and "so" and "any" in the sentence above.

    The book never raises its head to address anything above the sentence
    level. (How to write an essay is a separate subject.)

    Unfortunately, some people fall in love with revising sentences
    because rewriting gives them a pleasant sense of superiority, and it's
    easy to do--any sentence can be rephrased endlessly.

    Of course, you can rewrite your own sentences without irritating
    anyone, but revision can become an obnoxious obsession.

    For example, some posters on RBT fondly imagine that they are English
    teachers and that other posters are their students, whose style and
    sentences must be corrected.

    In extreme cases, a quibbler may even re-write his own book, sentence
    by sentence, without much improvement--even unto a third edition.

    In contrast, RBT's best writer is Chalo Colina.

    Chalo writes clear sentences, and his posts are free from typos,
    spelling mistakes, bad punctuation, and poor grammar.

    But that's not what makes Chalo's posts so good.

    Chalo's secret is his focus. He gives his main point the most space in
    his post. He doesn't wander. When he's made his point, he quits.

    (Unlike some of us, who can't resist parenthetic digressions and
    trivia.)

    A post from Chalo is an editor's dream. Whether you agree with him or
    not, Chalo has a point and he makes it without getting sidetracked.

    A quibbler will be more interested in removing the "or not" in the
    previous sentence than in what the sentence says.

    Who can imagine Chalo citing Strunk & White to justify nagging another
    poster to omit those two words?

    If Chalo disagrees with you, he doesn't waste much time quibbling
    about how you expressed yourself. He addresses your point, which is
    probably the best style.

    I'm no expert, and have no particular interest here, but I did recall
    that exact phrase in Strunk so I opened it and copied it.
    --
    Andrew Muzi
    www.yellowjersey.org
    Open every day since 1 April, 1971

  17. On Mon, 17 Mar 2008 22:49:08 -0600, A Muzi <[email hidden]>

    Quoted message said:
    Quoted message said:
    Quoted message said:

    >>>> John Thompson:
    >>>>> Not only that, they ignore the fact that many other countries, e.g.
    >>>>> the UK and Germany to mention only two, have been dealing with
    >>>>> terrorism for much longer than we have, and yet have managed to do so
    >>>>> without compromising their citizens' rights.

    Quoted message said:
    Quoted message said:

    >>> Bill Sornson wrote:
    >>>> Do a little research. HTH

    Quoted message said:
    Quoted message said:

    >> [email hidden] wrote:
    >>> Beware of anyone who uses the phrase "the fact that" to establish some
    >>> concept. In English composition, this is known as begging the
    >>> question. Instead of the phrase, the circumstances that appear to
    >>> make the concept a "fact" need be explained.
    >>> "the fact that" belongs in the same trash bin that the other hackneyed
    >>> phrases recently mentioned went to their demise for thinking writers.

    Quoted message said:
    Quoted message said:

    > A Muzi <[email hidden]> wrote:
    >> Indeed, from Strunk, 'Elements of Style':
    >> "Vigorous writing is concise. A sentence should contain no unnecessary
    >> words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences, for the same reason that a
    >> drawing should have no unnecessary lines and a machine no unnecessary
    >> parts. This requires not that the writer make all his sentences short,
    >> or that he avoid all detail and treat his subjects only in outline, but
    >> that every word tell.
    >> Many expressions in common use violate this principle:
    >> -snip table-
    >> In especial the expression /the fact that/ should be revised out of
    >> every sentence in which it occurs."
    >> [italics original]
    >> I'm not exceptional at composition either.

    Quoted message said:
    Quoted message said:

    [email hidden] wrote:
    > The fact that some posters have ended up quibbling over phrases that
    > they pretend to find offensive only exposes their lack of anything
    > relevant to say about the subject.

    Quoted message said:
    A Muzi said:

    The subject is a tarbaby I'm happy to not engage here. But, hey, a
    citation for an off-topic comment to an off-topic thread? Sure!

    Quoted message said:

    Hopefully, the vast majority of us will pardon you for splitting that
    infinitive.

    :-)

    The reason that Strunk & White is so short is that the book doesn't
    waste any time telling you how to write an essay.

    Instead, it urges endless revisions at the sentence level, such as
    removing "The reason that" and "so" and "any" in the sentence above.

    The book never raises its head to address anything above the sentence
    level. (How to write an essay is a separate subject.)

    Unfortunately, some people fall in love with revising sentences
    because rewriting gives them a pleasant sense of superiority, and it's
    easy to do--any sentence can be rephrased endlessly.

    Of course, you can rewrite your own sentences without irritating
    anyone, but revision can become an obnoxious obsession.

    For example, some posters on RBT fondly imagine that they are English
    teachers and that other posters are their students, whose style and
    sentences must be corrected.

    In extreme cases, a quibbler may even re-write his own book, sentence
    by sentence, without much improvement--even unto a third edition.

    In contrast, RBT's best writer is Chalo Colina.

    Chalo writes clear sentences, and his posts are free from typos,
    spelling mistakes, bad punctuation, and poor grammar.

    But that's not what makes Chalo's posts so good.

    Chalo's secret is his focus. He gives his main point the most space in
    his post. He doesn't wander. When he's made his point, he quits.

    (Unlike some of us, who can't resist parenthetic digressions and
    trivia.)

    A post from Chalo is an editor's dream. Whether you agree with him or
    not, Chalo has a point and he makes it without getting sidetracked.

    A quibbler will be more interested in removing the "or not" in the
    previous sentence than in what the sentence says.

    Who can imagine Chalo citing Strunk & White to justify nagging another
    poster to omit those two words?

    If Chalo disagrees with you, he doesn't waste much time quibbling
    about how you expressed yourself. He addresses your point, which is
    probably the best style.

    I'm no expert, and have no particular interest here, but I did recall
    that exact phrase in Strunk so I opened it and copied it.

    Dear Andrew,

    Yes, the phrase "the fact that" is listed in Strunk & White as the
    work of the devil.

    Prompted by Jobst's quibble, you looked it up in good faith.

    You weren't nagging or quibbling--I confused you with Jobst, and I'm
    sorry that I did so.

    My point is that it's a fairly silly quibble.

    We might as well debate whether "no particular interest" is (according
    to Jobst's version of the Strunk & White approach) just as awful an
    error as "the fact that," a false distinction that should be edited
    out wherever it appears, and an unmistakable sign of muddy thinking
    that invalidates everything said by anyone who writes it.

    Sheesh!

    Neither you nor I would quibble about whether "particular" should be
    removed from your post--I'm pointing it out here only to illustrate
    how silly such quibbles are. Most people who descend to such nonsense
    promptly commit far worse mistakes, starting with attaching such
    ridiculous importance to them.

    Again, my point is that it's usually a good sign that someone has
    nothing to say or is evading the subject when he starts telling other
    posters how to re-write their perfectly clear sentences. You weren't
    the one who was doing that and I goofed badly by implying that you
    were.

    Cheers,

    Carl Fogel

  18. In article <[email hidden]>,

    Quoted message said:


    Yes, the phrase "the fact that" is listed in Strunk & White as the
    work of the devil.

    Prompted by Jobst's quibble,

    Good one!

    --
    Michael Press

  19. In article <[email hidden]>,

    Quoted message said:

    We might as well debate whether "no particular interest" is (according
    to Jobst's version of the Strunk & White approach) just as awful an
    error as "the fact that," a false distinction that should be edited
    out wherever it appears, and an unmistakable sign of muddy thinking
    that invalidates everything said by anyone who writes it.

    It is not muddy thinking, it is a deliberate attempt
    to win an argument by asserting that ones thesis is a _fact_

    --
    Michael Press

  20. Michael Press said:

    In article <[email hidden]>,

    Quoted message said:

    We might as well debate whether "no particular interest" is (according
    to Jobst's version of the Strunk & White approach) just as awful an
    error as "the fact that," a false distinction that should be edited
    out wherever it appears, and an unmistakable sign of muddy thinking
    that invalidates everything said by anyone who writes it.

    It is not muddy thinking, it is a deliberate attempt
    to win an argument by asserting that ones thesis is a _fact_

    It can be used like that, but not necessarily: you could perfectly well
    say "the proposition that" (like your Abraham Lincoln) or "the thesis
    that", etc.

    Strunk & White are talking rubbish. The phrase does have a use which is
    to turn an indirect statement into a noun. Yes you can just about elide
    it but that can lead to confusion especially in a long sentence. There
    is nothing wrong with long sentences and sometimes they need more
    signposts in them like "the fact that" to help you find your way around.

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