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- Australia and New Zealand
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- 24 February 2004
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- 26 February 2004
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- Phillip Brown
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hippy said:"Phillip Brown" <[email hidden]> wrote in message
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Quoted message said:SENRYU
A senryu is a three line Japanese poem structurally similar to haiku.
It
Quoted message said:is unrhymed and the subject is based human nature. It is usually
satirical
Quoted message said:or ironic.
# line 1 - 5 syllables
# line 2 - 7 syllables
# line 3 - 5 syllables
here is hill to climb
why do i endure this pain
down is the up side
How about a Haiku:
(5-7-5(?) + season)
Uphill is summer
heat, burning thighs, sweat steaming
downhill thunderstorm
-kt
PS> this commute takes way too long -
I just spent 5 minutes reckoning if
'steaming' was 2 or 3 syllables.
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