So, HR2, this is what you have been doing with your time? If you ever need motivation buy a copy of Twilight by Stephanie Meyer. Read a few passages and then think about the stacks of money she is making for horrible, bad, bad, unbelievably bad, just terrible writing. Stephen King even felt the need to publicly diss her.
haven't read them myself....aimed at the preteen/teen girl market...I think there's 4 of them to date...How do I know this?...I have 2 daughters that are obsessed with them...1 has read all 4, 3 times....I refer to them as "Harry vampire"...anything that gets kids reading is a good thing in my book (no pun intended)...but I takes ya point about dross! 😄
Some little proofing changes and suggestions. I didn't use track changes, but have instead highlighted changes (in grey) and used strikethrough/underline as appropriate.
I haven't tinkered with the text otherwise.
I'll delete the post when you confirm you've read this and have the files.
