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I know that this is somewhat off topic, take a look at this site and tell me what you think. I'll
email everyone back who has constructive or editorial critics.

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Patrick Sadler

My first thought: Scam

-Rubystars

"dude" <[email hidden]> wrote in message
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I know that this is somewhat off topic, take a look at this site and tell me what you think. I'll
email everyone back who has constructive or editorial critics.

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Patrick Sadler

It looks ok. I didn't read all the copy. The buttons that say "The First Question" and "How are we
today" have the words hanging over the edge of the button. You might want to use a smaller sized
font. Personally, I don't like the use of the apostrophe after FAQ, but some people might argue
this point.

In the future you might want to incorporate a few small graphics to break up the color because there
is a LOT of green, which of course, I understand is for a reason, but it tends to be a little
monotonous to look at after awhile.

Over all it's not a bad effort. I'm sure that like everybody, you will change it from time to time.
Good selection on template.

SD

"dude" <[email hidden]> wrote in message
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Quoted message said:

I know that this is somewhat off topic, take a look at this site and tell me what you think. I'll
email everyone back who has constructive or editorial critics.

Prethanks.

linuxfree.netveggiemeat.htmOpen ↗

Cordially,

Patrick Sadler

Here's a tip: don't EVER compare yourself to a 'snake oil salesman' when you're trying to sell
something to someone. It SCREAMS scam, loud and clear.

Another thing, way too much text. For those of us without extrordinarily long attention spans, it's
simply far too much.

More science, less anecdotal evidence. It definitely does read like a scam to me.

-Jay

--

"[Robert Smith's] music makes you cry, even if you haven't broken up with
your girlfriend or ran over a kitty in the road and deep fried it in your
oven for lunch."