suggestions with lyrics

mongoose123 said:

Anyone a fan of The Veronicas? I bought their album the other day, its what i work out to. They're not too bad. I'm usually not a fan of these little poppy/rocky type of music but i don't know, some of their songs are catchy and upbeat and easy to listen to while i go cycling around the park.

Anyways thats besides the point. I'm actually trying to win their signed guitar in their next verse competition where i have to re-write their 2nd verse of their song 'hook me up'. Do you guys know it? I am having a little trouble with writing the verse and i was hoping i could get some help or suggestions.

There's more info in their site and if you haven't heard the song, its here as well theveronicas.com.aunextverse.htmlOpen ↗

any suggestions are greatly appreciated.

no one here has any ideas?? doesnt need to be a master piece? Just want snippets of ideas?? please?? hello??

mongoose123 said:

Anyone a fan of The Veronicas? I bought their album the other day, its what i work out to. They're not too bad. I'm usually not a fan of these little poppy/rocky type of music but i don't know, some of their songs are catchy and upbeat and easy to listen to while i go cycling around the park.

Anyways thats besides the point. I'm actually trying to win their signed guitar in their next verse competition where i have to re-write their 2nd verse of their song 'hook me up'. Do you guys know it? I am having a little trouble with writing the verse and i was hoping i could get some help or suggestions.

There's more info in their site and if you haven't heard the song, its here as well theveronicas.com.aunextverse.htmlOpen ↗

any suggestions are greatly appreciated.

So you want us to hopefully write the verse for you so you can win the guitar?

Crankyfeet said:

So you want us to hopefully write the verse for you so you can win the guitar?

yeah in a way...well I just want some hints...soem snippets of lyrics....you could give me bollocks of an answer ...i dun mind as long its something...yopu can enter the comp if you want as well!!

i fancy closing pubs
the chance at finding love
it's such a social whirl for such a mousy girl

pour me another pint
you know i'm out all night
anything to evade my insanity insanity

you wanna talk face to face
you wanna buy me for a song
but what if it turns out wrong
it won't turn out wrong
you know i've waited far too long

mongoose123 said:

yeah in a way...well I just want some hints...soem snippets of lyrics....you could give me bollocks of an answer ...i dun mind as long its something...yopu can enter the comp if you want as well!!

Aww man...the comps closed🙁 ...I was just about to finally get round to doing something for you mongoose. Not being sarcastic here...I wouldn't have clicked on your link if I wasn't serious.

judging by your avatar, we must say that is positively papal of you...

Crankyfeet said:

Aww man...the comps closed🙁 ...I was just about to finally get round to doing something for you mongoose. Not being sarcastic here...I wouldn't have clicked on your link if I wasn't serious.

the bloke changed his icon on us, please disregard my previous.

Hypnospin said:

judging by your avatar, we must say that is positively papal of you...

Hypnospin said:

the bloke changed his icon on us, please disregard my previous.

Yes, just to clear that up, when Hypnospin made his "papal" comment, my avatar was Hugh Heffner dressed as the Pope.

fickle avatar changes aside, do my veronica lyrics stand on their own?

Crankyfeet said:

Yes, just to clear that up, when Hypnospin made his "papal" comment, my avatar was Hugh Heffner dressed as the Pope.