gr8 vid em. the stair sets was gr8 nd the hand rail was well gd 2. u r a
lot beta than i thot u was! keep it up! cnt w8 2 ride wit u agen next
swum. i mite hav 2 go on the street ride then 2 lawlz r u goin 2 the
hockey in january? 2 improve in ur nxt vid try 2 cut each clip down a
bit more so its just the actual trick u r doin cos i noticed on sum
clips it lastd ages b4 u even gt on screen. thts my only critism tho so
keep up the gd work!
To all the people having fits about his spelling and grammar, it
doesn't actually matter. I don't see why, if someone especially has
problems with spelling and grammer, they should have to go and download
special programmes so they can write a decent enough post to satisfy
you lot. It's pretty lame. If you can work out what he is trying to
say, I dont see what the problem is. And (oh woops i started a sentence
with and!! :eek: grammar police!!) towards what alex said, it's not
like he is making an important speech or anything, he's just showing
you his video...
Also, if you didn't understand the start of my post, here it is in
standard english:
Fantastic video you have got there Em. The stair sets were wonderful
and the hand rail was even more pleasing. You are considerably better
than what I thought you were! Keep up this great work as I cannot wait
until the next chance I have to ride with you. I quite possibly will
attend the street ride at the next SWUM. Are you going to attend the
hockey meeting in January? I suggest, to improve your next video, that
you try to cut down each clip ever so slightly so it is just the actual
trick you are performing because I noticed on some clips that many
seconds passed before you even got onto screen. Thats would be my only
critism so keep up the good work.
🙂
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